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Another cr-cr-crumpled
Piece of pa-p-p-per
Lands in the bin-in-in
I sl-am-am-am
My han-an-ands down
on the des-es-esk
My mi-in-ind is not
syn-ch-ched with my hand
The idea is ar-oun-ound
But it com-om-omes out
Like an err-err-error
I wa-a-ant this
To be fi-i-ixed
But each ti-i-ime
Holds the sa-a-ame result
Maybe af-aft-er
This err-err-error
I'll have some-om-thing
Com-om-come
ou-ou-out
RIGHT!
Piece of pa-p-p-per
Lands in the bin-in-in
I sl-am-am-am
My han-an-ands down
on the des-es-esk
My mi-in-ind is not
syn-ch-ched with my hand
The idea is ar-oun-ound
But it com-om-omes out
Like an err-err-error
I wa-a-ant this
To be fi-i-ixed
But each ti-i-ime
Holds the sa-a-ame result
Maybe af-aft-er
This err-err-error
I'll have some-om-thing
Com-om-come
ou-ou-out
RIGHT!
Okay so I pretty much just wrote this now and it's another one of those poems I wrote to get me into an actual writing zone. So it's something I had to put a little thought into but doesn't have any of that deeper or extra meaning.
Meaning: I'm finding myself currently stuck where I want to write some of the Lit. ideas I have but I feel that if I start it, it won't come out the way I want it to. And that just happened to another poem I was trying to write and it got all weird and I hated it and ugh.
And the reason I had the whole poem set up in a
"ins-er-ert" form was well...actually I don't really know... O_o The word "error" popped up in my head first when I was thinking about how the poems kept coming out wrong and I think I added the stammer sort of idea to it to emphasize how wrong things keep coming out. Hence how the word "right" comes out correctly... I guess that makes sense... Hmm
[Written June 23.2010]
Meaning: I'm finding myself currently stuck where I want to write some of the Lit. ideas I have but I feel that if I start it, it won't come out the way I want it to. And that just happened to another poem I was trying to write and it got all weird and I hated it and ugh.
And the reason I had the whole poem set up in a
"ins-er-ert" form was well...actually I don't really know... O_o The word "error" popped up in my head first when I was thinking about how the poems kept coming out wrong and I think I added the stammer sort of idea to it to emphasize how wrong things keep coming out. Hence how the word "right" comes out correctly... I guess that makes sense... Hmm
[Written June 23.2010]
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oh btw, this gets a 
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