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Literature Text
My flesh
burns
My life
melts
My soul
turns
to ashes
My God
this pain
is immense
Flames
lick me dry
I can't
escape
I can't
just die
My fire
won't survive
I'll feed
myself to its desires
For it will
feed me mine
I can only
survive
in ashes.
burns
My life
melts
My soul
turns
to ashes
My God
this pain
is immense
Flames
lick me dry
I can't
escape
I can't
just die
My fire
won't survive
I'll feed
myself to its desires
For it will
feed me mine
I can only
survive
in ashes.
I wrote this for the Flame(s) Contest which you can see in the News section here: [link]
So I've wanting to write this for a while but I didn't really know how to go about it, and after listening a lot to the song 'The Flame' by Cheap Trick [] and getting kicked off the computer for about 20 minutes, I got the chance to write it.
It started out as the narrator being burned alive, sort of, like in a room of flames. Then I kind of made the flames be some sort of passion for something. And how the narrator can't die because her fire -- an inner emotion, inner being -- wouldn't survive. And the actual flames will be feeding on her [its desires] while she would be getting the flames desires, or approval of sorts. And then it just ends with how she can only survive in those ashes.
If that doesn't make much sense, I can understand, because I just had to dissect it after I wrote it. I think that's what I meant, but if you have other ideas, feel free to think by them.
[Written July 21.2010]
So I've wanting to write this for a while but I didn't really know how to go about it, and after listening a lot to the song 'The Flame' by Cheap Trick [] and getting kicked off the computer for about 20 minutes, I got the chance to write it.
It started out as the narrator being burned alive, sort of, like in a room of flames. Then I kind of made the flames be some sort of passion for something. And how the narrator can't die because her fire -- an inner emotion, inner being -- wouldn't survive. And the actual flames will be feeding on her [its desires] while she would be getting the flames desires, or approval of sorts. And then it just ends with how she can only survive in those ashes.
If that doesn't make much sense, I can understand, because I just had to dissect it after I wrote it. I think that's what I meant, but if you have other ideas, feel free to think by them.
[Written July 21.2010]
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I really like the metaphor you have for this.